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Retrieve the lost thing Today, I went with Tu Anh to retrieve her lost purse. It was so far, at Go Vap district. The street was crowded at that hour (it’s when everybody came back home from work). We started off from 4:40pm but we couldn’t back home until 7:30pm. It was terrible. The street lead to that destination wasn’t like in a city but like in a country. It was narrow and deserted. It was more difficult to find out the right street if you don’t have your friend accompanied with. The way back to dormitory was more simple than it was at start. On the way back, she asked me if I’d like drink milk tea. I refused because I didn’t want to waste her money (she lost her money in the lost purse, there was only identifications left.). when I was in my room, I decided to buy “súp cua” in the place that is near to my university and it took me 10 minutes to go there. But unluckily, it was sold out. Linh went with me because she needed to go to ATM to withdraw a little money for an Korean exam fee. She is my room-mate. She had just had a boyfriend yesterday. She is one of the most intelligent in my room. It ‘s true. She can remember any telephone number despite of reading it once. She is so smart with multiple choice question. Because she can remember the answer once she read them. What kind of head she has? This afternoon, I went to a repair laptop store with Tram. I didn’t understand why she could make that damage to her laptop. It looked like anything, that’s difficult to describe. It looked funny. The fee for repairing is calculated about 600.000 VND. What a poor girl!
13 janv. 2017 15:48
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Retrieving something lost.

Today, I went with Tu Anh to retrieve her lost purse. It was so far away, at Go Vap district. The street was crowded at that hour (it’s when everybody returns from work). We started off from 4:40pm but we couldn’t get back home until 7:30pm. It was terrible. The street route was not like in a city but like in the country. It was narrow and deserted. It was more difficult to find out the right street without your friend. The way back to the dormitory was more simple than it was at start.* On the way back, she asked me if I’d like some milk tea. I refused because I didn’t want to waste her money (she lost her money in the lost purse, there was only identifications left.). When I was in my room, I decided to buy “súp cua” in the place that is near to my university and it took me 10 minutes to go there. But unluckily, it was sold out. Linh went with me because she needed to go to the ATM to withdraw a little money for a Korean exam fee. She is my room-mate. She had just had a boyfriend yesterday. She is one of the most intelligent in my room. It ‘s true. She can remember any telephone number just by reading it once. She is so smart with multiple choice questions. Because she can remember the answer once she read them. What kind of head has she?


This afternoon, I went to a laptop repair store with Tram. I didn’t understand how she could make that kind of damage to her laptop. It looked like something that’s difficult to describe. It looked funny. The fee for repairing was calculated at about 600.000 VND. What a poor girl!

*or, the way back to the dormitory was more difficult than the way there.

Very well written!

13 janvier 2017
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