Can you correct my mistakes, please?
Informal letter
You are going to a concert this evening with a group of friends and want to ask your English friend Peter to come too.
Write a letter to leave for Peter. In your letter, you should:
- ask Peter to join you at the concert this evening
- explain where the concert will take place
- tell Peter what sort of music will be performed
Hi Peter,
I am writing this letter to ask you if you want to come with us to a pop concert this evening.
Last week, my school friends and I bought five tickets to enjoy of conciert of a well-known band of music called “The sun”. However, today my friend Patrick tell me that he isn’t going to go to concert of this evening because he is ill and his doctor recommend that he doesn’t go out until he feel good.
Because of this, I would like to invite you to come with us because I know you really like to go with friends to concerts, also you love pop music, such as we are going to hear this evening.
What’s more, the concert will be at a stadium near of my home, so you can to stay in my house to sleep, if you want.
Anyway, I hope your answer as soon as you can.
Love,
Brenda.
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Can you correct my mistakes, please?
Informal letterYou are going to a concert this evening with a group of friends and want to ask your English friend Peter to come too.
Write a letter to leave for Peter. In your letter, you should:
- ask Peter to join you at the concert this evening
- explain where the concert will take place
- tell Peter what sort of music will be performed
Hi Peter,
I am writing this letter to ask you if you want (wanted) to come with us to a pop concert this evening.
Last week, my school friends and I bought five tickets to enjoy of conciert (concert) of a well-known band of music called “The sun”. However, today my friend Patrick tell (told) me that he isn’t going to go to (the) concert of this evening because he is ill and his doctor recommend(ed) that he doesn’t go out until he feel(s) good.
Because of this, I would like to invite you to come with us because I know you really like to go with friends to concerts, also you love pop music, such as we are going to hear this evening.
What’s more, the concert will be at a stadium near of my home (house), so you can to stay (the night) in my house to sleep, if you want.
Anyway, I hope your answer as soon as you can.
Love,
Brenda.
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Can you correct my mistakes, please?
Informal letterYou are going to a concert this evening with a group of friends and want to ask your English friend Peter to come too.
Write a letter to leave for Peter. In your letter, you should:
- ask Peter to join you at the concert this evening
- explain where the concert will take place
- tell Peter what sort of music will be performed
Hi Peter,
I am writing this letter to ask you if you want to come with us to a pop concert this evening.
Last week, my school friends and I bought five tickets to the concert of a well-known band called “The sun”. However, today my friend Patrick told me that he isn’t going to go to the concert this evening because he is ill and his doctor recommends that he doesn’t go out until he feels better.
Because of this, I would like to invite you to come with us because I know you really like to go with friends to concerts, also you love pop music, which we are going to hear this evening.
What’s more, the concert will be at a stadium near my home, so you can stay over in my house, if you want.
Anyway, I hope to hear back from you as soon as you can.
Love,
Brenda.
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