Can you correct my mistakes, please? Story Your English teacher wants you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence: “I was on the bus when I got a text message” I was on the bus when I got a text message. My brother had written me to tell me he was coming from Italy to visit me. It was a amazing news! Since one year ago, my brother is living in another country because he found a job very interesting where he earns more money than in Spain. When he wrote me to tell me it, I started to prepare a dinner to that night and I invited to whole my family to my house. Besides, my mother had cooked his favourite food which was chicken and potatoes baked. When he arrived to my house, he was very happy and grateful with us. He came with his girlfriend in order to we meet her, but also there was other surprise. My brother had come with his girl to tell us they are going to get married the next year in Venice. All in all, we are very happy to the news and we hope to help them with whole the preparations to that day so special.