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The music I like What kind of music do you listen to? I'm into many kinds of music except some stupid songs about nothing. When people ask me what kind of music I like, I cannot answer this question. I have a ton of good stuff loaded up in my iPhone, so I listen to many different kinds depending on my mood and the environment. I also tend to listen to some compilations. A few months ago I realized that I became a rock music buff. What I like about rock music is that it has lots of different kinds within the genre and it does not make me bored. One day I can listen to heavy metal, and the other day pop rock is music to my ears. I don't think I will ever be able to stick to only one kind of music.
21 juin 2017 15:02
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The music I like

What kind of music do you listen to? I'm into many kinds of music except some stupid songs about nothing. When people ask me what kind of music I like, I cannot answer this question. I have a ton of good stuff loaded up in  on my iPhone, so I listen to many different kinds depending on my mood and the environment. I also tend to listen to some compilations. A few months ago I realized that I became a rock music buff. What I like about rock music is that it has lots of different kinds within the genre and it does not make me bored. One day I can listen to heavy metal, and the other day pop rock is music to my ears. (Another day I prefer pop rock.) I don't think I will ever be able to stick to only one kind of music.

-Overall, this is well-written.

-"Loaded up" is not entirely wrong, but unnatural. "On" is a better preposition. 

-"Music to my ears" is an idiom and I wouldn't use it to describe actual music. It is used when something sounds very good. I suggested the sentence: Another day I prefer pop rock.    (  http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/music+to+ears   )

21 juin 2017
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The music I like

What kind of music do you listen to? I'm into many kinds of music except some stupid songs about nothing. When people ask me what kind of music do I like, I cannot answer this question. I have a ton of good stuff loaded on my iPhone, so I listen to many different kinds depending on my mood and the environment. I also tend to listen to some compilations. A few months ago I realized that I became a rock music buff. What I like about rock music is that it has lots of variety within the genre and it does not make me bored. One day I can listen to heavy metal, and the next, pop rock is music to my ears. I don't think I will ever be able to stick to only one kind of music.

Very well written!

21 juin 2017
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