28/11/17
Almost 10 days that I didn't write my diary but now I'm back. After I watching music video of Ed Sheeran which was Perfect. I was really happy and feel good with this video. It was positive and romantic moment of couple. I'd love to see people love and good take care each other. It reveals that people still have human kind and the world is not too bad to live with happiness. Love is beautiful
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28/11/17
It is almost 10 days that I [didn't write]/haven't written my diary but now I'm back. [After I]/Since watching a music video of Ed Sheeran (which was) called Perfect, I [was]/am really happy and feel good with about this video. It [was]/is positive and shows romantic moments of a couple. I'd love like to see people who love and [good] take good care of each other. It [reveals]/shows that people still have (human) kindness and [the world]/it is not too [bad]/difficult to [live with]/find happiness (in this world). Love is beautifulVous souhaitez progresser plus vite ?
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