R.I.P. Fashion Business

Since the first woman from the Neanderthal times put a bone in her hair and a collar of wolf teeth around her neck, humankind has always been interested in fashion. From the clothes made from animals’ furs ("animals' furs" is correct, but we typical speak about 'animal fur' in general) to the best dresses by Dior or Chanel, we have had a wide range of different materials and styles.

However, only a (small) part of the society had the opportunity to change their clothes every season or year because for hundreds,-if not thousands, of years- only wealthy people could afford it. Meanwhile, most of the population only got something new at the very exceptional moments of their lives. Therefore, they did not have big problems to achieve get/source/provide the raw materials.

Nevertheless, nowadays there are already 7 billion inhabitants on earth and even if not all of them can buy clothes often, a lot of people need to constantly change their look constantly. In fact, it is easy to do this because the modern fashion industry allows you to wear cheap clothes.

The problem is that this industry needs a lot of new material and, in as a consequence, we are wasting our nature, (I'm not sure what you want to say here - we are wasting the Earth's resources, perhaps?) beginning starting with the water: they say that three thousand litres of water are used just to make just a pair of jeans.

Due to that reason (Due to that /For that reason), the fashion of next century will change dramatically. According to some scientists, other type of materials will be discovered. As a result, the future clothes of the future (sounds better this way in this context) will be always be clean and their colour and shape will change depending on the our bodies and the season of the year(the season. OR the time of year).  Since those fabrics will be always new, you will have the same model (garment/outfit?) during for your whole life (it sounds better to say 'for life') and that will be the death of the actual current fashion business industry.

Well done, Esther!

An excellent and thought provoking piece of writing on a very interesting subject.  Just a few small changes, some of which were related to style.

If there's anything that wasn't clear, please don't hesitate to ask!

Leigh

R.I.P. Fashion Business

Since the first woman from the Neanderthal time put a bone in her hair and a collar of wolf teeth around her neck humankind has always been interested in fashion. From the clothes made from animals’ furs to the best dresses by Dior or Chanel, we have had a wide range of different materials and styles.

R.I.P. Fashion Business

Since/From the first woman from/in (the) Neanderthal time put a bone in her hair and a collar of wolf teeth around her neck humankind has always been interested in fashion. From the clothes made from animals’ furs to the best dresses by Dior or Chanel, we have had a wide range of different materials and styles.  From the first woman in Neanderthal times....

However, only a part of the society had the opportunity to change their clothes every season or year because for hundreds-if not thousands of years- only wealthy people could afford it. Meanwhile, most of the population only got something new at the very exceptional moments of their lives. Therefore, they did not have big problems to achieve the raw material. Todo perfecto y de repente no entiendo

Nevertheless, nowadays there are already 7 billion inhabitants on earth and even if not all of them can buy clothes often, a lot of people need to change their look constantly. In fact, it is easy to do that because the modern fashion industry allows you to wear cheap clothes.

The problem is that this industry needs a lot of new material and, in consequence, we are wasting our resources, beginning with the water: they say that three thousand litres of water are used to make just a pair of jeans.

Due to/For that reason, the fashion of next century will change dramatically. According to some scientists, other type of materials will be discovered. As a result, the future clothes will be always clean and their colour and shape will change depending on the bodies and the season of the year. Since those fabrics will be always new, you will have the same model during your whole life and that will be the death of the actual fashion business.

muy alto nivel, impresionante

R.I.P. Fashion Business

Since the first woman from the Neanderthal time put a bone in her hair and a collar of wolf teeth around her neck humankind has always been interested in fashion. From the clothes made from animals’ furs to the best dresses by Dior or Chanel, we have had a wide range of different materials and styles.

However, only a part of the society had the opportunity to change their clothes every season or year because for hundreds-if not thousands of years- only wealthy people could afford it. Meanwhile, most of the population only got something new at the very exceptional moments of their lives. Therefore, they did not have big problems to achieve the raw material.

Entiendo el sentido de la frase en negrita, pero no entiendo como conecta con la frase anterior. Si no tuviesen problemas de conseguir la material prima, porque no podrian tener nueva ropa facilmente? El asunto era el coste del trabajo de hacer la ropa? Solamente el adinerado podian pagar el coste a pesar de que la material prima era por todas partes?

Lo major: Therefore, they did not have any problems finding/acquiring/obtaining raw material.  "Achieve" no funciona aqui. Claro hay otras formas de decir todo esto.  Otro punto: "Big problems" se puede decirlo pero en este escrito me suena demasiado colloquial.

Nevertheless, nowadays there are already 7 billion inhabitants of earth and even if not all of them can buy clothes often, a lot of people need to change their look constantly. In fact, it is easy to do that because the modern fashion industry allows you to wear cheap clothes.

The problem is that this industry needs a lot of new material and, in consequence, we are wasting our nature, beginning with the water: they say that three thousand litres of water are used to make just a pair of jeans.

Due to that reason, the fashion of next century will change dramatically. According to some scientists, other type of materials will be discovered. As a result, the future clothes will be always clean and their colour and shape will change depending on the bodies and the season of the year. Since those fabrics will be always new, you will have the same model during your whole life and that will be the death of the actual fashion business.