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Sarah
The horse...Marwari
This breed of horse was originated from the region of India called Marwari. The horse has a large head curved ears, that can rotate 180 degree. Straight shoulders help the horse to pull it's legs out of deep sand.
Marwari has an excellent flair, can come back home in any circumstances and save lives to others. Bold and loyal horse never leaves it's keeper/owner even if it wounded.
Please, correct my text
16 déc. 2017 16:46
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This breed of horse was originated from the region of India called Marwari. The horse has a large head curved ears, that can rotate 180 degree. Straight shoulders help the horse to pull it's legs out of deep sand. Marwari has an excellent flair, can come back home in any circumstances and save lives to others. Bold and loyal horse never leaves it's keeper/owner even if it wounded. Please, correct my text
Hi Sarah,
Hope this helps!
This breed of horse originated ("was" is not necesary here) in (not from) the region of India called Marwari. These horses have large heads and curved ears that can rotate 180 degrees. They have straight shoulders that help pull their legs out of deep sand. Marwari have an excellent flair (as someone who doesn't know horses I can't comment on whether the use of "flair" is appropriate here) and can find their way home under any circumstances. They have also been known to save lives of others. (People? Other horses?) These bold (brave?) and loyal horses will never leave their owners, even if they are wounded. (The horse or the owner?)
16 décembre 2017
Thank you Sudeep for link. It is indeed amazing story! I didn't read it before. I noticed this one, because of it funny ears)) but story indeed touched me!
16 décembre 2017
WOW! Sarah, that was indeed a surprise, never thought you would write about an Indian breed:) I think you read the story about this Horse, right? The Horse name that saved its owner's(king) life was Chetak.
Here is the story if you have not read, you may find it interesting:)
http://www.thehindu.com/features/kids/Chetaks-act-of-loyalty/article15768650.ece
Thanks, Sarah!
16 décembre 2017
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