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New York City I went to New York last summer for 7days. It was one of my biggest dream in my life. I was so excited but a little scared. For example, when I take the train, I remember someone told me that subway is danger. So I was nervous but there's no problem. I looked the map, and then a kind man asked me "where you wanna go?" He taught me how to get the destination very politely. Some people are rude, but I could see the American culture that I have never seen. It's so valuable experience. I couldn't believe that I need to know the number for the restroom in the city. But it was fun. I definitely wanna go to USA again. Everything is stimulating for me.
9 janv. 2018 11:04
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New York City

I went to New York last summer for 7days.
It was one of my biggest dream in my life.
I was so excited but a little scared.
For example, when I took the train, I remember someone told me that the subway is dangerous. So I was nervous but there's no problem. I looked at the map and then a kind man asked me "where  do you wanna go?" He taught me how to get to the destination very politely. Some people are rude, but I could see the American culture that I have never seen (before). It's so valuable experience. I couldn't believe that I need to know the number for the restroom in the city. But it was fun. I definitely wanna go to the USA again. Everything is stimulating for me.
9 janvier 2018

New York City

I went to New York last summer for 7 days.
It was one of my biggest dreams in my life (to do this).
I was so excited but a little scared.
For example, when I took the train, I remember someone told me that the subway is dangerous. So I was nervous but there was no problem. I looked at the map, and then a kind man asked me "where (do)* you wanna go?" He taught me how to get to the destination very politely. Some people are rude, but I could see parts of the American culture that I have never seen. It was such a valuable experience. I couldn't believe that I needed to know the passcode for the restrooms in the city. But it was fun. I definitely wanna go to the USA again. Everything is stimulating for me.

NOTE: *You can technically not use "do" here, but it's not really correct English. It's very informal. 

11 janvier 2018
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