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Bohemian Rhapsody Movie Hi everyone! I just wanted to express my joy after I noticed that the movie of Freddie Mercury and its band its going to be released soon... are you waiting for it as I do?

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Bohemian Rhapsody Movie

Hi everyone! I just wanted to express my joy after I noticed that the a movie of Freddie Mercury and its his band its is going to be released soon... are you waiting for it as I do?


Your entry was very good.  I made a couple of minor suggestions. Also, the last part can also be said as more clearly as:....

….are you looking forward to seeing it too?

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