The best thing in the world which does not even cost money
Perhaps you are thinking now of cars, houses, watches or jewellery when you think about the best thing in life. But that's all wrong because in my opinion the best valuable thing you will ever find is: love. To be exactly: true love. Once you will find your soul partner, it means such a partner to who you think your soul is connected to, you will feel like that a lifetime is too short. When you find someone you love truly you will think that you need at least 10 lifetimes to show your partner all the love hidden in your heart. So when you start to think so your only hope can be the afterlife where you will find your beloved one again. You will find it again but with one change: in afterlife it will be for eternity.
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The best thing in the world which does not even cost money.
Perhaps you are thinking now of cars, houses, watches or jewellery when you think about the best thing in life. But that's all wrong because in my opinion the best most valuable thing you will ever find is: love. To be exactly: true love. Once you will find your soul partner, it means meaning such a partner to whom you think your soul is connected to, you will feel like that as if a lifetime is too short. When you find someone you love truly you will think that you need at least 10 lifetimes to show your partner all the love hidden in your heart. So when When you start to think so, your only hope can be the afterlife where you will find your beloved one again. You will find it/him/her? again but with one change: in afterlife it will be for eternity.jewellery, shows as a spelling error, so I presume the American English is jewelry
.. to who you think... - sounds strange
.. to whom you think ... is correct, but "whom" is less common these days, particularly in America
... to someone ..
.. like .. is commonly used with clauses, but technically incorrect
.. as if ... is correct
"So when you start to think so your only hope can " gave me problems working out what you wanted. You may like to rephrase.
Several expressions are not very natural, but I've tried to stay as true to your original as possible.
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