Molly
For a person who'd rather stay in their comfort zone like me, I always procastinate things that gets me feel uncomfy. However, today, by some way, some how, I have done a couple of such things and I just feel amazing. My mind gets more space to think about other things and it feels freedom a bit more.
17 avr. 2024 03:38
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People who'd rather stay in their comfort zone like me always procrastinate (here, if you start your sentence with "people" you should use it as the subject of the verb "procrastinate" instead of using "I" in the middle of your sentence, otherwise it's confusing) and doing that makes me feel uncomfortable. However, today somehow I have done (a couple of such things => what does "such things" refer to?) and I just feel amazing. I can finally think about other things and I feel a bit more free.
17 avril 2024
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