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Written Exercise 175 – ALIPAY What is Alipay? It is a top ranked payment app in China and one of the must-have apps for phones. In 2004, Alipay was produced by the Alibaba Group owned by Jack Ma. As it is widely used both in various chain hypermarkets and small stalls, it owns over 1.3 thousand million /1.3 billion users so far. Although it is a hot app, I remember I started to use Alipay in 2017 or so. Because the company made a lot of promotions and discounts to attract people to do payment with it, then I became one of its users. I like doing payments with it, not only its discounts, but also its good function on showing how much you pay or receive every day.
5 juin 2021 16:12
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Written Exercise 175 – ALIPAY What is Alipay? It is a top ranked payment app in China and one of the must-have apps for phones. In 2004, Alipay was produced by the Alibaba Group owned by Jack Ma. As it is widely used both in various chain hypermarkets and small stalls, it owns over 1.3 billion users so far. Although it is a hot app, I remember I started to use Alipay in 2017 or so, because the company made a lot of promotions and discounts in order to attract people to make payments with it, then I became one of its users. I like making payments with the app and not only because of its discounts. It is due to the function which shows you your daily expenses and income.
5 juin 2021
Written Exercise 175 – ALIPAY What is Alipay? It is a top ranked payment app in China and one of the must-have apps for phones. In 2004, Alipay was released by the Alibaba Group owned by Jack Ma. As it is widely used both in various big chains and smaller stores, it has over 1.3 billion users so far. Although it has been a hot app for awhile, I remember I only started to use Alipay in 2017 or so. Because the company made a lot of promotions and discounts to attract people to do payment with it, I became one of its users. I like making payments with it, not only because of its discounts, but also because it has a good interface showing how much you pay or receive every day.
As always, awesome work! I made a few small suggestions to help it sound more natural, but it's perfectly understandable already. :)
5 juin 2021
Written Exercise 175 – ALIPAY What is Alipay? It is a top ranked payment app in China and one of the must-have apps for phones. In 2004, Alipay was produced by the Alibaba Group owned by Jack Ma. As it is widely used both in various chain hypermarkets and small stalls, it owns over 1.3 billion users so far. Although it is a hot app, I remember I started to use Alipay around 2017. Because the company made a lot of promotions and discounts to attract people to do payment with it, then I became one of its users. I like doing payments with it, not only its discounts, but also its good function on showing how much you pay or receive every day.
Wow, great job!! Just a couple of things, in my region we don't word numbers like this "1.3 thousand million" the 1.3 billion is good though. Also, although "or so" is correct grammar wise, it sounds more fluid and natural with "around 2017."
5 juin 2021
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