YipimaL
Hi this is a random sunny day in shanghai, I was on my way biking to work, and took this picture while waiting for the red traffic light. Because this old man wearing a vintage Jacket ,as we can see the dark blue and red one. I like taking this kind of pictures to catch the moment that in my mind, as well as the evidence of time. Thanks for reading, and correct for me. I appreciate🧡
25 févr. 2021 16:44
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Hi this was a random sunny day in Shanghai. I was on my way biking to work (better: I was biking to work) , and took this picture while waiting at the red traffic light. This old man was wearing a vintage jacket (the dark blue and red one) . I like taking these kind of pictures to catch a moment that in my mind, as well as the evidence of time. "as well as the evidence of time" is unclear. Do you mean: as well as to have evidence of a particular point in time... "? Thanks for reading, and correct for me. I appreciate🧡
25 février 2021
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