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Today, I felt overwhelmed by lots of things to do in my mind. There are too many things that I don't have enough to do them well. Seeing that, I decided to listen to the poem I have read recently "my heart leaps up". I listened to it again and again and I thing I can read it out loud better. But the most important thing is that, I feel calm and inspired to solve my problem again.
19 août 2024 03:22
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Today, I felt overwhelmed by having so much to do on my mind. There are more things that need doing than there is time to do them well. Seeing that, I decided to listen to the poem I have read recently, "My heart leaps up". Having listened to it again and again, I think I can read it better out loud. But the most important thing is that I feel calm and inspired again to solve my problem.
Good job. I like the way you used "seeing" as an adjective. I moved some of your adverbs and adjectives closer to the words they modify ("better", "again"). That is not necessary but is a good habit to make your writing most clear.
19 août 2024
Today, I felt overwhelmed by lots of things to do in my mind. There are too many
things that I don't have enough to do them well. Seeing that, I decided to
listen to the poem I have read recently "my heart leaps up". I listened to it
again and again and I think I can read it out loud better. But the most
important thing is that, I feel calm and inspired to solve my problems again.
19 août 2024
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Molly
Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais, Français, Japonais, Coréen, Vietnamien
Langue étudiée
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais, Français, Japonais, Coréen
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