Kazu かず קאזו
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Please help me correct my writing! topic: You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Dear Sir White, Thank you for having me art your cookery course the other day. I usually cook for my lunch and dinner so I really enjoyed making bread with you. Unlike my daily cooking for meals, making breads and loafs is very fun. I have baked several breads by myself since the course such as chocolate bread, banana bread and even sandwiches. I really appreciate the basic tips that you taught in your course for baking because now my family can taste fresh breads ay home and it is very healthy to eat homemade bread with no preservatives. Recently I have been to an authentic Italian restaurant that many of my friends like for the first time and ordered a traditional pizza. The pizza was delicious and its crust was perfectly crunchy. I wonder if you have another cooking course for pizza. I'd like to take it if you offer it. Sincerely Kazu
18 sept. 2023 08:17
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Please help me correct my writing! Topic: You recently took a short culinary course. The culinary school asked for your feedback on the course. Dear Sir White, Thank you for having me at your culinary course the other day. I usually cook my own lunch and dinner, so I really enjoyed making bread with you. Unlike what I cook everyday, making bread and loaves was very fun. I baked several breads by myself since the course such as: chocolate bread, banana bread, and even sandwiches. I really appreciate the basic baking tips you gave in your course because now my family can eat fresh bread at home. It is also very healthy to eat homemade bread with no added preservatives. Recently, I’ve been to an authentic Italian restaurant that many of my friends like and ordered a traditional pizza for the first time. The pizza was delicious and the crust was perfectly crunchy. Do you have another cooking course for pizza? I'd love to take it if you do. Sincerely, Kazu
いいポストですね。☺️ Great post! パンは、私の好物です。🍞✨ Bread is my favorite food! いつか、パンと色々な和食の料理をしたいと思います!🥖🍱 Someday, I’d love to learn how to make bread and all kinds of Japanese food!
19 septembre 2023
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