Dina
At a young age, physical strength and a sense of justice mean a lot. That's why I used to fight a lot at school. At the age of sixteen, I broke my classmate's nose. Basically, as the investigator explained, it was considered to be a serious bodily harm. But after the interrogation, he promised not to start a case, but offered to inform him about cases of theft at school and left the phone number. The paper had to be thrown out in the corridor, because the victim was eavesdropping at the door. Then I realized that dignity should always be stronger than fear… The first breakup with your beloved one is not supposed to be easy. It was difficult for me to get over this too until I sat down at the table and wrote a heartfelt lyrical story about a submarine officer. When the full stop was put on the paper at four in the morning, I was fine and went to bed. Then I realized that the art is a great force… And one more thing. Even as a child, I was struck by the difference between a man and a woman. This shock has not passed until now. Check this, please. Thank you in advance.
16 mai 2022 15:05
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It was considered to be serious bodily harm. He promised not to start the case.
17 mai 2022
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"It was considered serious bodily harm." "After the interrogation, he promised not to start a case, asked me to inform him about cases of theft at school, and left his phone number." (If I'm understanding your meaning correctly.) Are you intentionally using passive voice in the part about writing late at night? Your usage is correct. Depending on what your assignment/purpose is, you might want to use active voice instead: "When I put the full stop on the paper at four in the morning, I was fine and went to bed." "Then I realized that art is a great force." "This shock has never passed." I hope this helps!
17 mai 2022
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