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It’s sunny today, the weather is gorgeous. My fever is easing, things are getting better. Basically, I am goofing off by imperial decree. In order to recover, I’ve been staying in my bed all day, watching my iPad or playing games from time to time. Moreover, my mom bought a huge bucket of Belgian chocolates, in case of my loss of appetite. My dad made off with a few during my sleep. However, it was a nice day.
22 déc. 2022 08:28
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It’s sunny today, the weather is gorgeous. My fever is easing, things are
getting better. Basically, I am goofing off by imperial decree. In order to
recover, I’ve been staying in my bed all day, watching (films/videos/TV on) my iPad or playing games
from time to time. Another good thing is that my mom bought a huge bucket of Belgian chocolates,
in case I lost my appetite. ( or - because of my loss of appetite) My dad made off with a few during my sleep. (or - while I was asleep)
However, it was a nice day. (Not sure ‘however’ is needed here, it was pretty much all good!)
Glad to hear you are getting better.
Look up ‘moreover’ on the internet and find some examples of how to use it. It is often used incorrectly.
22 décembre 2022
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Chinois (mandarin), Anglais, Japonais
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