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Yesterday, I worked part-time for 11 hours and was very tired, so I slept a lot when I got home. However, I was still sleepy during class today. After school, I have to go to my part-time job again. 😭Today is my third day of work in a row, and I am looking forward to finishing it and getting some rest‼︎

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Yesterday, I worked part-time for 11 hours and was very tired, so I slept a lot when I got home. However, I was still sleepy during class today. After school, I have to go to my part-time job again. 😭Today is my third day of work in a row, and I am looking forward to finishing it and getting some rest‼︎
Great! I changed the part about 'working part-time' because that might seem as if during the 11-hour shift you were working part-time, if that makes sense.
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Yesterday, I worked for 11 hours at my part-time job and was very tired, so I slept a lot when I got home. However, I was still sleepy during class today. After school, I have to go to my part-time job again. 😭Today is my third day of work in a row, and I am looking forward to finishing it and getting some rest‼︎

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