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The Tim じぁん!!!
It's sunny today. I've made up my mind. I'm going to stick my handwritten cinquain on the back of Mom's phone, which inside a transparent case, so she can see it all the time. It might seem a bit boastful, but who cares? People around her hardly read English, good! Mom Loving, caring Baking, cooking, cleaning Always there to help and guide Mother
27 sept. 2024 10:14
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It's sunny today. I've made up my mind. I'm going to stick my handwritten cinquain on the back of Mom's phone, which is inside a transparent case, so she can see it all the time. It might seem a bit boastful, but who cares? People around her can hardly read English, good! Mom Loving, caring Baking, cooking, cleaning Always there to help and guide Mother
Nice! I checked and cinquains are supposed to be 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllables. Yours is 1, 2, 6, 7, 2 but if you are happy with it I guess it’s all that matters!
27 septembre 2024
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