I was rainy in the morning, so I brought umbrella. There is not space where keep it in my school, so I don’t like rainy day. There are not also plastic umbrella bags. A floor has become slippery and dangerous. I want a place to put it. There is one more thing I would like to see add. This is elevavor. It’s generally crowed. I can’t take it when I want go up.
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I was rainy in the morning, so I brought an umbrella. There is not space to keep
it at my school, so I don’t like rainy day. There are also not plastic umbrella
bags. The floor has become slippery and dangerous. I want a place to put it. There
is one more thing I would like to see added. This is an elevavor. It’s generally
crowed. I can’t take it when I want go up.
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