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Today, I watched a movie about Michael Jackson. The movie was very interesting, and I learned more about his life and music career. I enjoyed listening to the famous songs that appeared in the movie. His performances were impressive, and I could understand why he became so popular around the world. After watching the movie, I spent some time thinking about his influence on music and entertainment. It was an enjoyable and memorable day.

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Today, I watched a movie about Michael Jackson. The movie was very interesting, and I learned more about his life and music career. I enjoyed listening to the famous songs that appeared in the movie. His performances were impressive, and I can understand why he became so popular around the world. After watching the movie, I spent some time thinking about his influence on music and entertainment. It was an enjoyable and memorable day.
Great work. 'could' isn't exactly wrong here, but as you can still understand this, I'd use the present.

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