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Today, I woke up and wanted to take a shower and go to school, but I was more tired than I expected because of yesterday’s part-time job in Shibuya, so I skipped school. I thought my shift would finish around 11:00 p.m., but it actually ended at 11:30 p.m. Then it took me about an hour to walk and get home. I was really tired. I decided that I will never go to Shibuya to help again. Now I have my usual part-time job in Yokohama. But one person can’t come today, and most of the experienced staff are not working. We are also one person short, so I think today will be very hard, too. I really don’t want it to be busy today. I hope it won’t be too busy.

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Today, I woke up and wanted to take a shower and go to school, but I was more tired than I expected because of yesterday’s part-time job in Shibuya, so I skipped school. I thought my shift would finish around 11:00 p.m., but it actually ended at 11:30 p.m. Then it took me about an hour to get home. I was really tired. I decided that I will never go to Shibuya to help again. Now I have my usual part-time job in Yokohama. However, one person can’t come today, and most of the experienced staff are not working. We are also one person short, so I think today will be very hard too. I really don’t want it to be busy today. I hope it won’t be too busy.
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