Akram Alwajih
1 Yemen has been facing one of the worst humanitarian Crisis in the world . There are millions of people in dire need to food, clean water and medical assistance . 2 The conflict in Yemen has resulted in massively displacement which leaving families homeless or access yo basic necessities. We should move now to provide shelter and support to affected 3 Humanitarian organization are working tirelessly in Yemen to deliver life-saving aid and providing healthcare to those in need . Your support may make difference. Donate today and help save life . 4 Healthcare system on brink of collapse . We must ensure all of Yemenis have get medical services especially women and children who expose for risk particularly . 5 children of Yemen are most suffering from the ongoing Crisis. They are facing malnutrition, lack of education and war shocking. We should prioritize for their well-being and invest in their future . 6 The agriculture sector has impacted extremely due to conflict. Which resulted in food insecurity. Supporting farmers and activiting agriculture are crucial to achieve food sustainability for long-time . 7 Obtaining to clean water is fundamental right of human rights . In Yemen millions of people lacking of safe water sources , resulting in prevalance of disease . We must work together to provide cleaning water and health facilities .
24 déc. 2023 18:49
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1. Yemen has been facing one of the worst humanitarian crises in the world. There are millions of people in dire need of food, clean water, and medical assistance. 2. The conflict in Yemen has resulted in massive displacement, leaving families homeless or without access to basic necessities. We should move now to provide shelter and support to those affected. 3. Humanitarian organizations are working tirelessly in Yemen to deliver life-saving aid and provide healthcare to those in need. Your support can make a difference. Donate today and help save lives. 4. The healthcare system is on the brink of collapse. We must ensure that all Yemenis have access to medical services, especially women and children who are particularly at risk. 5. Children in Yemen are suffering the most from the ongoing crisis. They are facing malnutrition, lack of education, and the shocking impact of war. We should prioritize their well-being and invest in their future. 6. The agriculture sector has been extremely impacted due to the conflict, resulting in food insecurity. Supporting farmers and activating agriculture are crucial to achieving long-term food sustainability. 7. Access to clean water is a fundamental human right. In Yemen, millions of people lack safe water sources, resulting in the prevalence of disease. We must work together to provide clean water and health facilities.
Hi! Nice practice! Hope these corrections help :)
27 décembre 2023
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