Does it sound natural? Does it contain anything you would change?

My favourite animals are cats because I really like the way they behave. They’re cute and fluffy, and when they want attention, they usually rub against people’s legs, which I find really adorable. I also like that they can be both independent and affectionate at the same time

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Does it sound natural? Does it contain anything you would change?

My favourite animals are cats because I really like the way they behave. They’re cute and fluffy, and when they want attention, they usually rub against people’s legs, which I find really adorable. I also like that they can be both independent and affectionate at the same time

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This is beautifully written, natural, fluent and expressive throughout. Nothing sounds forced or unnatural at all.

If I had to suggest anything, it would be tiny stylistic touches rather than corrections: "the way they behave" could become "their behaviour" for a slightly more sophisticated feel, and "rub against people's legs" could be "rub up against people's legs" - native speakers often add "up" there. But honestly both versions are perfectly natural.

The last sentence is particularly well constructed -  "both independent and affectionate at the same time". Well done, Angela! 🐱

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Its flawless. I smiled from reading this.

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flawless

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