Please correct the mistakes in these sentences (short text)
(Is part of a formal email that I want to send)

I have the intention after I finish college, to continue studying the specialty of Prosthodontics.
I´m really interested in the program that you offer. And I have some questions about the admissions of international students.
I hope you can help me with the following questions.
1) Is a validation of my professional title as general dentist at the University of Michigan needed?
2) What are the minimum requirements for international students for applying to the Prosthodontics program, additional to the TOEFL scores.

I am looking forward to your reply.
Thanks for your help in advance.

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Please correct the mistakes in these sentences (short text)
(Is part of a formal email that I want to send)

I have the intention after I finish college, to continue studying the specialty of Prosthodontics.
I´m really interested in the program that you offer. And I have some questions about the admissions of international students.
I hope you can help me with the following questions.
	1) Is a validation of my professional title as general dentist at the University of Michigan needed?
2) What are the minimum requirements for international students for applying to the Prosthodontics program, additional to the TOEFL scores.

I am looking forward to your reply.
Thanks for your help in advance.

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You have written this e-mail well.

Just one note, for the grammar in the second line it should read "I'm really interested in the program you offer, and I have some questions about the admission of international students."

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Thank you for your recomendation.Next time I´ll do so.

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