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Sarah
is this sentence okay?
Deluxe artistic inspiration contributes a lot to our best quality.
9 juin 2014 02:37
Réponses · 1
To use an idiomatic expression, the sentence as is, Lays---It---On---Rather---Thick.
Words which "glorify" some feature in such an extravagant way, are easily recognizable as
"huffing" some product or service. Any ordinary person could immediate recognize that you are exaggerating. You need a much simpler sentence, such as this:
artistic inspiration contributes a lot to our quality.
9 juin 2014
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Sarah
Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais, Espagnol
Langue étudiée
Anglais, Espagnol
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