Anyone can help me correct my English sentence ?
我看见你空间的一些图片，那些关于你做的玻璃，非常漂亮。你大部分的时间都是在创做这些东西吗？这些东西做成之后都会怎么处理，我的意思是展览，销售或者其他吗？
你做这个多久了？你的工作室可以参观吗？希望有机会可以参观你的工作室，还有看你制作玻璃。

I saw some pictures of your workshop and your glass. They are pretty cool. Do you spend most of your time to crate them? And what is the next when they are finished? I mean they are for sale or exhibition or something?
How long have you done this? Is the workshop allowed to visit? I hope I have the chance to visit your workshop and look at you glass.

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Anyone can help me correct  my English sentence ?
我看见你空间的一些图片，那些关于你做的玻璃，非常漂亮。 你大部分的时间都是在创做这些东西吗？ 这些东西做成之后都会怎么处理，我的意思是展览，销售或者其他吗？
你做这个多久了？ 你的工作室可以参观吗？希望有机会可以参观你的工作室，还有看你制作玻璃。

I saw some pictures of your workshop and your glass. They are pretty cool. Do you spend most of your time to crate them? And what is the next when they are finished? I mean they are for sale or exhibition or something? 
How long have you done this?  Is the workshop allowed to visit? I hope I have the chance to visit your workshop and look at you glass.

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This is how I think you should have written it...
I saw some pictures of the glass work and your workshop.  They are pretty cool!  Do you spend most of your time (much time) creating them? What happens to them when they are finished?  I mean, are they for sale, or do you exhibit them?  How long have you been doing this (type of work).  Is your workshop open to visitors?  I hope that I have the chance to visit your workshop and look at your glass work.

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I mean that are they for sale or exhibition or something else?

How long did it take to do them?

I hope to have a chance to visit your workshop

(Good, keep practicing)