are these two translations correct?
سلام شما نخست وزير ليوان تو كس ننت

Hello prime minister, I raise a glass to you!

انتقام ریچل کوری و تام هورن دال و برایان ایبری و شهدای کشتی مرمره و میلیون ها شهید کودک فلسطینی رو ازت میگیریم

We get the revenge of Rachel Currie, Tom Horn Iberi, and Brian Dahl and we get the martyrs of the Marmareh ship and millions of young Palestinian martyrs.

Question

are these two translations correct?
سلام شما نخست وزير ليوان تو كس ننت

Hello prime minister, I raise a glass to you!

انتقام ریچل کوری و تام هورن دال و برایان ایبری و شهدای کشتی مرمره و میلیون ها شهید کودک فلسطینی رو ازت میگیریم

We get the revenge of Rachel Currie, Tom Horn Iberi, and Brian Dahl and we get the martyrs of the Marmareh ship and millions of young Palestinian martyrs.

Answer

No! It's not correct. First, I should tell you if someone writes this comment in your post. It wanted to tell you a curse to you. Don't care about it!
I cannot be meaning it to you. Because in my culture we can not use this sentence for another one. 
So, in my culture, it's terrible speaking like this. God bless you AND all the people in USA & IRAN