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Laura G
HI Guys I need that you correct me this text Pleasee Thank you
Good morning, I am going to teach you to prepare a delicious skewer perfect for any occasion. The ingredients that we need are:
• skewer sticks
• Our favorite fruits, we chose apple, banana, and grapes
• Biscuit sticks
• Piece of carrot
• Chocolate chips
The first thing to do is cut the bananas into slices. We carefully inserting each slice in our stick skewer. Then we put a piece of apple that give the appearance of a hat and finally put a grape on the tip. To decorate, we take the chocolate chips and make eyes and buttons, for the nose we can use a piece of carrot and biscuits sticks for the arms. Finally we enjoy a delicious snowman.
15 avr. 2016 01:07
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I've written most of my corrections in CAPITAL LETTERS. Near the end I've broken one long sentence into 2 shorter sentences.
The first thing to do is cut the bananas into slices. We carefully INSERT each slice ON our SKEWER (omit the word STICK). Then we put a piece of apple that GIVES the appearance of a hat and finally put a grape on the tip. To decorate, we take the chocolate chips and make eyes and buttons. FOR the nose we can use a piece of carrot and BISCUIT sticks for the arms. Finally we enjoy a delicious snowman.
15 avril 2016
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Laura G
Compétences linguistiques
Anglais, Français, Allemand, Portugais, Espagnol
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Anglais, Français, Portugais
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