Are this sentences correct?
1)The girl leans toward him laying her right hand on his shoulder.
2)The man is wearing a navy blue suit with a pink tie. He is also wearing something black around his left wrist looks like a strap.
3)In the background there are a lot of trees and bushes and the sun's rays lighting up them.
4)Green meadow like landscape really enlivens the picture.
5)People don't know their own language for hundred percent.
6)The bigger girl worn a baggy striped sweatshirt , a pair of light blue jeans and a pair of pink half wellingtons.
7)There is opulent vegetation tinctured by the rays of the sun in the picture.
8)The woman and the girls come tripping with the smile on their face down the path of this lush green park.
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Question

Are this sentences correct?
1)The girl leans toward him laying her right hand on his shoulder. 
2)The man is wearing a navy blue suit with a pink tie. He is also wearing something black around his left wrist looks like a strap.
3)In the background there are a lot of trees and bushes and the sun's rays lighting up them.
4)Green meadow like landscape really enlivens the picture.
5)People don't know their own language for hundred percent.
6)The bigger girl worn a baggy striped   sweatshirt , a pair of light blue jeans and a pair of pink half wellingtons. 
7)There is opulent vegetation tinctured by the rays of the sun in the picture. 
8)The woman and the girls come tripping with the smile on their face down the path of this lush green park. 
Many thanks

Answer

1)The girl leans toward him, and LAYS her right hand on his shoulder. 
Suggestion: Keep the verb the same (simple present tense) Use a comma to connect the two actions.
2)The man is wearing a navy blue suit with a pink tie. He is also wearing something black around his left wrist WHICH looks like a strap.
Suggestion: Use WHICH (relative pronoun) to connect something black with its appearance (looks like a strap).
3)In the background, there are a lot of trees and bushes and the Sun's rays lights them up.
Suggestion: Sun (proper noun) / lights (something) up is a phrasal verb to describe making something brighter.
4)Green meadow-like landscape really enlivens the picture.
Green and meadow like are adjectives describing the landscape (noun). Meadow like means the landscape looks like a meadow. Therefore, it is a compound adjective and requires a hyphen.
5)People may not understand their own language completely.
Suggestions: It sounds a little informal to use percentage.

6)The bigger girl wore a baggy striped sweatshirt , a pair of light blue jeans and a pair of pink half wellingtons. 
Suggestion: "Wore" should be used here as simple past tense already confers the meaning of the past.

Answer

(Edited words are in capital letters)

1) The girl leans toward him laying her right hand on his shoulder. (Correct)
2) The man is wearing a navy blue suit with a pink tie. He is also wearing something black around his left wrist THAT looks like a strap.
3) In the background, there are a lot of trees and bushes, and the sun's rays ARE lighting THEM up.
4) A green meadow-like landscape really enlivens the picture.
5) People don't know their own language ONE hundred percent.
6) The bigger girl WORE a baggy striped sweatshirt, a pair of light blue jeans, and a pair of pink half wellingtons.
7) There is opulent vegetation tinctured by the rays of the sun in the picture. (Correct, but "tinctured" is not a word we use often)
8) The woman and the girls come tripping BY with SMILES on their FACES down the path of this lush green park. (I'm not sure if "tripping" is the right word here. Do you mean "skipping"?)

I hope my answers are helpful, Medina. Please ask if you have any more questions =)