The erosion on the plug of the control valve
The erosion on the plug of the control valve is generated where cloud and vortex cavitations are unstable, and their volumes and shapes change.

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The erosion on the plug of the control valve
The erosion on the plug of the control valve is generated where cloud and vortex cavitations are unstable, and their volumes and shapes change.

Is this sentence grammatically correct?
Is the phrase "The erosion on the plug of the control valve" authentic?

Thanks a lot in advance

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That looks good to me.

This is a very good and complex sentence... well done!

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Thank you so much, DavidK. Yes, you're absolutely right.

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"erosion" isn't "generated". It "occurs". The erosion on the plug occurs where ...

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