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Wendy
Is is right?
When spring season came, my mom and dad took me to the beautiful Songshan Lake for a spring outing.
18 sept. 2019 09:11
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Thank you so much.
18 septembre 2019
You can just say “when spring came” instead of “when spring season came.” Or you could omit that all together and just say “My mom and dad took me to the beautiful Shongshan lake for a spring outing.” Mentioning spring twice can make the sentence seem redundant
18 septembre 2019
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Wendy
Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais
Langue étudiée
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