Hi, could you check these sentences, please?
1) He is exposed to weather changes that make him feel sick.
2) He scrambled up the tree to rescue a cat that was stuck there.
3) I accidently startled him when run into him at dark
4) Waves grinded the stones on a shore over the time so they were really smooth now
5) I couldn't concentrate because he was making a grating sound by rubbing two stick made of metal together
6) He tries to impose his ideas to everyone he mets
7) It looks like his conscience sounds asleep

Question

Hi, could you check these sentences, please?
1) He is exposed to weather changes that make him feel sick.
2) He scrambled up the tree to rescue a cat that was stuck there.
3) I accidently startled him when run into him at dark
4) Waves grinded the stones on a shore over the time so they were really smooth now
5) I couldn't concentrate because he was making a grating sound by rubbing two stick made of metal together
6) He tries to impose his ideas to everyone he mets 
7) It looks like his conscience sounds asleep

Answer

Thanks!

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3) I startled him when I accidentally ran into him in the dark.
4) Waves have ground the stones on the shore over time so they are really smooth now.
6) He tries to force his ideas on everyone he meets.
7) It looks like his conscience is sound asleep.

Answer

I have some grammar suggestions:
1. He is sick because of weather changes.
or
- Weather changes make him feels sick.

3) I accidentally startled him when running into him at dark
4) Waves ground the stones on a shore over the time so they are really smooth now

6) He tries to impose his ideas on everyone he meets 
or
- He tried to impose his ideas on everyone he met

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