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Can you check my personal statement in English
Dear XXX:
In the past 20 years of my lives, it seems that accounting is not new to me. Because my parents were graduate from financial school, and my mother was engaged in accounting and auditing work, so I have a special sensation of accounting. Therefore, I finally chose the accounting profession as my undergraduate professional. In the eyes of most people, accounting is a rather strict discipline, not only stressed that the principle of accounting, but also to explore the development of the law of those which can reveal the accounting system and the concept of the theoretical structure, and also conducted a study of accounting principles and concrete application of the principles, putting forward scientific index system and reflect and control methods and techniques. In my view, accounting is an art, using different accounting methods dealing with an accounting issue itself is a pursuit of diversity of experience, is to consider the issue from different angles well. Therefore, I love the discipline, and have worked hard towards this.
In college, I had the experience of my first real touch with accounting. I learned a lotcurriculum about accounting. In this regard, I paid a lot of efforts on the basis of accounting, intermediate financial accounting and the subsequent high-level financial accounting etc. and truly gain a lot knowledge from them, especially the mid-level financial accounting which I was in the top 10 of accounting department. Due to the degree of difficulty of the other tests, I did not achieve good scores on them, however, I firmly believe that I have mastered the principles and knowledge of them. In other specialized courses, I have also performed well and in the science-related courses, I have achieved a higher result.
I benefited a lot during the learning process of accounting profession. First of all, I got professional knowledge, understood the accounting treatment methods, and studied other relevant content such as management, auditing, financial regulations, which not only enrich my theoretical knowledge, but also taught me a method of learning. Because the class work is far from enough for my profession so it calls for a lot of after-class efforts to supplement and perfect the study. Secondly, through the study of this profession, my character tend to be more steady and stable, creating a more serious attitude towards working. Accounting is a profession which calls for patience, carefulness and concentration. When I first came into contact with it I felt more blundering, and didn’t really realize the fun from it. However, when I paid fully attention on it, I finally found the true fun. It seems that my mind was sublimated and became calm then. And by working on issues, I do have the idea of how important is strictness towards accounting. I understand that in order to become qualified accounting personnel, I have to achieve the accuracy of the sum accounts for each handle.
In the university, in addition to studying on my profession, I also actively participated in various school activities. I joined the DV state associations of Wuhan Technology University, and served as minister of External Relations Department. During that period, I helped the Association raised 1000RMB for the use of our activities. In addition, I am the organizer of sports activities of our class and participated sports meeting held by Wuhan Technology University in which we achieved some awards in individual items. The badminton competition I organized received actively participation and also unanimous praise.
In the extra-curricular time, I conducted a number of practical activities. During the time I practiced in the Financial Services Department in Logistics Group of our university, I assisted the accounting staff there and registered sub-ledgers of raw materials, without one mistake. In the summer time of this year and last year, I had the opportunity for my internship in the national top 20 companies - Dongfeng Automobile Co., Ltd. which is a subsidiary of Dongfeng Motor Finance Co., Ltd. and Dongfeng Automobile Co., Ltd. Market Information Department. In the meantime, I got familiar with the company's commercial loan business and examine the basic processes to help commercial lenders review audit information to improve the efficiency of the company's funding. Also, I put forward my point of view on the amount of the company's commercial vehicles, sales volume and the information of the whole market and the relevant chart I made about that also got support of the head of the apartment.
My own character is steady and kind. Choosing the United Kingdom, choosing distinguished school precisely because I believe the profound cultural foundation of the United Kingdom and famous teaching style of the school is apt for the development of my personality. XXX University, with a good style of study, excellent teacher team, beautiful campus environment, and advanced teaching facilities, more importantly, the kind of cultural atmosphere and cultural heritage deeply attracted me. In addition, distinguished school's accounting professions are also very competitive; if I were fortunate enough to join your school I will certainly complete all the required studies through my efforts to repay it to my culture.
Shi Cheng
2009.10.14
20 oct. 2009 11:07
Réponses · 2
Your writting is very good. But, it is not the way what the native English speakers write. Example, "Because my parents were graduate from financial school". In English speaking countries, there is no fanancial school, it is business school. The same sentence, we will write it as " Because my parants were college graduated with major in accounting".
Your writting is better than me, but the diction and the use of the English language is different. So, we can tell that English is your second language. Good job, hang in there!!!
20 octobre 2009
ahahah can i steal this?
20 octobre 2009
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Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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