1. Watching the basketball games OF Taipei Deaflympics must be the best life experience I have ever had. Correction: Watching the Taipei Deaflympics basketball games must have been one of the best experiences of my life. 2. It was my first time to watch a LIVE AND FORMAL basketball game. Correction: It was my first time watching a live basketball game. or It was my first time watching a live tournament basketball game. 3. Therefore, everything was so FRESH to me and THE FEELING OF LIVE was much more different than just sitting in front of TV. Correction: Everything was so new and exciting to me. And the feeling of watching it live was so much different than just watching it on TV. 4. I was much MOVED by the players. Correction: I was very moved by the players. 5. Although all of them are deaf, they still not LEAVING their dreams behind. Correction: Although all of them are deaf, they did not abandon their dreams. or Although all of them are deaf, they did not give up on their dreams. 6. They know THAT they have to keep working and never give up so that they can achieve their goals. Correction: They understand that they have to keep working hard and never give up in order to achieve their goals. 7. That’s why they all did such a great job in this big event and all of them ARE BECOMING the true champions in my mind. Correction: That is why they all played so well in this big event. All of them are true champions in my mind.