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I slept all day because I was sick today.
I have a fever. I also have a headache. I also have a cough.
I want you to get well soon.
11 mai 2025 06:08
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I slept all day because I was sick. I have a fever, a headache, and a cough.
I hope you get well soon.
Alternative Version:
I spent the day sleeping because I was feeling sick. I’ve got a fever, a headache, and a cough.
I hope you feel better soon.
Short Tip: Instead of repeating “I also have”, try combining items into one sentence (e.g., “I have a fever, a headache, and a cough”). It sounds smoother and more natural. Advice on Natural Flow of English: To sound more natural, use "hope" instead of "want" when wishing for someone’s health to improve, as it conveys a more sincere and common sentiment. Also, try varying sentence structures to make your writing less repetitive.
12 mai 2025
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kkjun
Compétences linguistiques
Anglais, Japonais
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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