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【Randoseru / Japanese School Bag】
“Randoseru” is a mandatory bag for children in elementary school. We usually spend with this bag for six years. Therefore, it is a very precious gift for children and a symbolic one. When l was a child, they had only two colors; red and black. However these days, they have many colors; pink, blue, brown, purple, and so on. It’s an incredible thing for me. I think that reflects respecting to children’s individuality and gender free.
I’m sure that our school style with Randoseru will continue in 10 years in Japan.
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23 oct. 2021 23:32
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124_2110 Could you help me correct the following text ?
【Randoseru / Japanese School Bag】
“Randoseru” is a mandatory bag for children in elementary school. We usually keep this bag for six years. Therefore, it is a very precious gift for children and a symbolic one. When l was a child, they had only two colors; red and black. However these days, they have many colors; pink, blue, brown, purple, and so on. It’s an incredible thing for me. I think this reflects the child’s individuality and gender choice.
I’m sure that our school style with Randoseru will continue for another 10 years in Japan.
Photo by SEIBAN
24 octobre 2021
124_2110 Could you help me correct the following text ? 【Randoseru / Japanese
School Bag】 “Randoseru” is a mandatory bag for children in elementary school. We
usually have/keep this bag for six years. Therefore, it is a very precious gift
for children and a symbolic one. When l was a child they had only two colors;
red and black. However, these days they have many colors; pink, blue, brown,
purple, and so on. I think it’s an incredible thing. I think that it’s a way of respecting children’s individuality and it is gender neutral. I’m sure that our school style with the Randoseru will continue in 10 years in Japan.
Photo by SEIBAN
Well written!
23 octobre 2021
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