Hi there. I had a part-time job today. I usually go by car, but today my parents used the car and I had to walk. Furthermore, it's raining today, so I'm depressed. Moreover, I have homework to do by t

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Hi there. I had a part-time job today. I usually go by car, but today my parents used the car and I had to walk. Furthermore, it's raining today, so I'm depressed. Moreover, I have homework to do by today, so I want to go home early, but I will be late because I am walking. Today was my unlucky day, but I'm fine because tomorrow is Saturday.

30 juin 2023 12:35

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Hi there. I had a part-time job today. I usually go by car, but today my parents used the car and I had to walk. Furthermore, it's raining today, so I'm depressed. Moreover, I have homework due today, so I want to go home early. Unfortunately, since I have to walk, I'll end up getting home late. Today was not my lucky day, but I'm fine because tomorrow is Saturday.

Leo's comments are good! I only wrote a more natural set of sentences in case you want some slightly different feedback. Also, "Today was my unlucky day" sounds a bit strange, "today was not my lucky day" is more common.

30 juin 2023

Hi there. I went to my part-time job today. I usually go by car, but today my parents used the car and I had to walk. Furthermore, it's raining today, so I'm depressed. Moreover, I have homework to do by today, so I want to go home early, but I will be late because I am walking. Today was my unlucky day, but I'm fine because tomorrow is Saturday.

Great. Another option would be to say "I have homework due today"

30 juin 2023

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