Juliane
Hey ! Could you please correct this? Thanks ! Hey! My name is Bala. Nice to meet you! I live in New Dehli, the capital city of India. The official currency is the Indian rupee. There are 1,38 billion inhabitants in my country. The climate in India is varied, but if I had to sum it up we can say that there are four seasons. From January to February we can consider it's winter, from March to June we can consider it's summer, from June to December we can consider it's the rainy season and from October to December the post-monsoon season. In India, there are 22 official languages. Hindi is the most spoken language in the country since 40% of people speak it. 1 out of 10 Indian speaks English. Indeed, India is a former British colony and as a consequence it is part of the Commonwealth. The motto of India is "Satyamev Jayate" which means "truth alone triumphs". The title of the national anthem is "Jana Gana Mana" which means "you are the rulers of the minds of the people". Have a nice day !
15 mars 2022 15:42
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Hey ! Could you please correct this? Thanks ! Hey! My name is Bala. Nice to meet you! I live in New Dehli, the capital city of India. The official currency is the Indian rupee. There are 1.38 billion inhabitants in my country. The climate in India is varied, but if I had to sum it up, we could say that there are four seasons. From January to February we would consider it winter, from March to June we would consider it summer, from June to December we would consider it the rainy season, and from October to December, the post-monsoon season. In India, there are 22 official languages. Hindi is the most-spoken language in the country since 40% of people speak it. 1 out of 10 Indian speaks English. Indeed, India is a former British colony and as a consequence it is part of the Commonwealth. The motto of India is "Satyamev Jayate" which means "truth alone triumphs". The title of the national anthem is "Jana Gana Mana" which means "you are the rulers of the minds of the people". Have a nice day !
Hi Juliane! There are essentially no errors in this passage--good job! Make sure to use a period instead of a comma when putting a number though. Grammatically, everything is correct, but some things wouldn't really be said that way, so I've put some alternatives. Bonne Journée!
15 mars 2022
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