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The storm raged outside, but nothing could dampen my spirits for singing class today. It was a revelation! Singing uses a completely different voice than speaking, and I finally understood how to unlock it. My teacher even surprised me by offering a spot in the upcoming Mother's Day show! Mom was ecstatic, but I can't deny the fluttering in my stomach. Performing in front of a crowd? Will I freeze on stage? I don’t know. There's still time to practice, so I'll push myself and see how far I can go. One step, one note at a time, I'll decide by the deadline.
20 avr. 2024 12:09
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The storm raged outside, but nothing could dampen my spirits for singing class
today. It was a revelation! Singing uses a completely different voice to
speaking and I finally understood how to unlock it. My teacher even surprised
me by offering me a spot in the upcoming Mother's Day show! Mom was ecstatic, but I
can't deny the fluttering in my stomach. Performing in front of a crowd? Will I
freeze on stage? I don’t know. There's still time to practice, so I'll push
myself and see how far I can go. One step, one note at a time, I'll decide by
the deadline.
All good
21 avril 2024
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The storm raged outside, but nothing could dampen my spirits for singing class
today. It was a revelation! Singing uses a completely different voice than
speaking, and I finally understood how to unlock it. My teacher even surprised
me by offering a spot in the upcoming Mother's Day show! Mom was ecstatic, but I
can't deny the fluttering in my stomach. Performing in front of a crowd? Will I
freeze on stage? I don’t know. There's still time to practice, so I'll push
myself and see how far I can go. One step, one note at a time, I'll decide by
the deadline.
Hi Tim, very good effort on your writing!
Here are a few corrections (no major mistakes)
Surprised me by offering me a spot
Fluttering in my stomach - it's good but more natural sounding would be the butterflies in my stomach.
Will I freeze - it's correct, but would I? (conditional) is better because it's not very concrete
One note at a time and I'll decide by the deadline.
Nicely written, engaging and interesting article.
Well done! Keep up the good work!
20 avril 2024
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The Tim じぁん!!!
Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais, Japonais
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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