Gloria
If time is possible ,where and when do you want to go? If I have the time machine to travel whenever I want. Definitely, I am willing to go back to the memories when I graduated from university several years ago. I would love to share my reasons. Now, I worked alone far away from my family. It takes 5 hours to drive home. I seldom go back home to visit my family, even once a year during the Chinese Spring Festival.I missed the time when I with family. The most important reason is that I wanted to stay with my grandma for the rest of her life.My grandma, who is more than 75 years old, has devoted most of her time and energy to cultivate me.But I leave her for the time she needs me most.She gradually became older and weaker, but all she wants is that I can chase after my dream and she neither wants to be my burdens nor chains. Therefore, I want to go back to live with her longer.
6 mars 2022 14:10
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hello can we practice together?
21 mars 2022
If time is possible ,where and when do you want to go? If I have the time machine to travel whenever I want. Definitely, I am willing to go back to the memories when I graduated from university several years ago. I would love to share my reasons. Now, I worked alone far away from my family. It takes 5 hours to drive home. I seldom go back home to visit my family, even once a year during the Chinese Spring Festival.I missed the time when I with family. The most important reason is that I wanted to stay with my grandma for the rest of her life.My grandma, who is more than 75 years old, has devoted most of her time and energy to cultivate me.But I leave her for the time she needs me most.She gradually became older and weaker, but all she wants is that I can chase after my dream and she neither wants to be my burdens nor chains. Therefore, I want to go back to live with her longer. We gonna to practice English together not Persian or Chinese my dear .
1 avril 2022
If time is possible ,where and when do you want to go? If I have the time machine to travel whenever I want. Definitely, I am willing to go back to the memories when I graduated from university several years ago. I would love to share my reasons. Now, I worked alone far away from my family. It takes 5 hours to drive home. I seldom go back home to visit my family, even once a year during the Chinese Spring Festival.I missed the time when I with family. The most important reason is that I wanted to stay with my grandma for the rest of her life.My grandma, who is more than 75 years old, has devoted most of her time and energy to cultivate me.But I leave her for the time she needs me most.She gradually became older and weaker, but all she wants is that I can chase after my dream and she neither wants to be my burdens nor chains. Therefore, I want to go back to live with her longer. Persian
22 mars 2022
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If time travel is possible, where and when do you want to go? If I had a time machine to travel whenever I want. Definitely, I am willing to go back to the memories when I graduated from university several years ago. I would love to share my reasons. Now, I worked alone far away from my family. It takes 5 hours to drive home. I seldom go back home to visit my family, even once a year during the Chinese Spring Festival.I missed the time when I with family. The most important reason is that I wanted to stay with my grandma for the rest of her life.My grandma, who is more than 75 years old, has devoted most of her time and energy to cultivate me.But I leave her for the time she needs me most.She gradually became older and weaker, but all she wants is that I can chase after my dream and she neither wants to be my burdens nor chains. Therefore, I want to go back to live with her longer.
The content is pleasant but avoids the subject. Time travel is an absurdity. Also, most people confused by the fact that travelling through time is not the same as travelling through space. A time machine would not move in space; only in time. You need to write about travelling through time. If there is a space component, you need to think about what it is and how it might be possible. Writing about how sweet your memories are for your lovely grandmother isn't tackling this subject. You also need to put spaces between the ends of sentences and the first letter of the next.
8 mars 2022
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