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90 day's training: Day 12 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) This weekend is three days because of a national holiday. 2) Yesterday, we went to a small beer festival which followed the international well-known German Oktoberfest after our dinner. 3) We drunk some glass of the most famous German Bier from Munich. The brewery is called the HofbrĂ€uhaus. It was coincidence that we were really in the Munich's HofbrĂ€uhaus in August. 4) Today, We drunk a bottle of white wine from Alsace. We often drink German and Austrian wein, but we also like drinking french white wein. 5) What kind of alcohol do you like drink? Do take place in your country some beer festival like the German Oktoberfest?
22 sept. 2024 10:08
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90 day's training: Day 12 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) This weekend is three days because of a national holiday. 2) Yesterday after dinner (a nicer syntax) we went to a small beer festival which followed the well-known international German Oktoberfest 3) We drunk some glasses (plural) of the most famous German beer from Munich. The brewery is called the HofbrĂ€uhaus. It was a coincidence that we were actually in Munich's HofbrĂ€uhaus in August. (Cities don’t need the article) 4) Today we drank (past simple of drink) a (needs the article) bottle of white wine from Alsace. We often drink German and Austrian wine, but we also like drinking French white wine/white wine from France . 5) What kind of alcohol do you like to drink? Do beer festivals (plural) such as the German Oktoberfest take place in your country? (Better syntax)
22 septembre 2024
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