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In the past I thought about setting a new business. My hobby is traveling and I really enjoy to search a new and interesting holiday destination. But after a short analize I decided to postpone my idea. I am afraid that this business doesn't give me enough money. This day I am happy about my job and I search some holiday offers for my all family. So I can say that I am realizing my dream.
20 mars 2023 08:29
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In the past I've thought about starting a new business. My hobby is traveling and I
really enjoy searching for new and interesting holiday destinations. But after a
short analysis I decided to postpone my idea. I am afraid that this business won't give me enough money. These days I am happy with my job and I searched for some
holiday offers for my whole family. So, I can say that I am realizing my dream.
Hi there, this was so well written. You're overall structure and delivery of your thoughts was great. I did make a few corrections and hope they help you. I too love traveling. Again great job.
20 mars 2023
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In the past I've thought about setting a new business. My hobby is traveling and I really enjoy looking for new and interesting holiday destinations. But after a short analysis, I decided to forget about that idea because I am afraid that such kind of business won't be lucrative enough. For now, I am happy with my job and I look for some holiday offers for all my family, so I can say that I am realizing my dream somehow.
20 mars 2023
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Compétences linguistiques
Anglais, Polonais
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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