Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot. Even the air feels hot. My house and university are cool because of the air conditioner, but it is so hot outside that the temperature d

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Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot. Even the air feels hot. My house and university are cool because of the air conditioner, but it is so hot outside that the temperature difference might make me feel sick. I feel tired and have no energy. I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy more cooling items.

1 juil. 2025 03:46

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Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot, even the air feels hot. My house and university are cool because of they have air conditioners / air conditioning systems, but it is so hot outside that the temperature difference might make me feel sick. I feel tired and have no energy and I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy more cooling items.

Well written, take care.

1 juil. 2025 11:27

Well done!!

1 juil. 2025 10:59

Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot. Even the air feels hot. My house and university are cool because of the air conditioner, but it is so hot outside that the temperature difference might make me sick. I feel tired and have no energy. I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy more cooling items.

1 juil. 2025 10:58

Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot,such that even the air feels hot. My house and the u niversity are cool because of the air conditioner. it is so hot outside that the heat might make me feel sick. I feel tired and have no energy. I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy more cooling items.

Avoid short minute sentences and use conjunctions to merge those smaller sentences. Otherwise well written 👏 well done!

1 juil. 2025 05:54

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