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I ate avocado for the first time yesterday. I thought I wanted to eat poki bowl, so I made it. I didn't want to put it in because I had never eaten avocado and hated it, but my mother wanted to put it in, so I put. I didn't like it, but didn't hate it, so I try to eat it from now on.
3 mai 2025 23:41
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I ate avocado for the first time yesterday. I wanted to eat a poke bowl, so I made one. At first, I didn’t want to add avocado because I had never tried it and thought I’d hate it. But my mother wanted to include it, so I did. I didn’t like it, but I didn’t hate it either, so I’ll try to eat it again from now on.
Alternative Version (More Natural / Fluent Style):
Yesterday, I tried avocado for the first time. I felt like eating a poke bowl, so I made one. I wasn’t sure about adding avocado since I’d never had it before and thought I wouldn’t like it. But my mom wanted to include it, so I gave it a try. I didn’t really like it, but I didn’t hate it either—so I’m going to try eating it more often.
Tip: Use “try + -ing” when talking about testing something (e.g. try eating it), and remember that “poke” (pronounced poh-kay) is often written with that spelling in English. Also, avoid repeating “want to” too often—try using alternatives like felt like or wasn’t sure about for variety and fluency.
13 mai 2025 10:45
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