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I called my mother, so I was feeling down. I cried while I talking her. She was worried about me.
15 mai 2025 07:41
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I called my mother whilst I was feeling down. I cried while I was talking to her. She was worried about me.
15 mai 2025
I called my mother and I was feeling down because I cried while I was talking her. She was worried about me.
I replaced "so" by "and" at the beginning of your sentence because the way you wrote it meant that just the fact of calling your mother let you feeling down. You were feeling down because she was worried about you, not just because she called you. Hope you’ve manage to reassure to mother and that you’ll have more cheerful conversations in the future.
15 mai 2025
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Compétences linguistiques
Anglais, Japonais
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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