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Can someone correct me my fairy tale,please?¿
The story begins with two siblings that lived in a castle with their stepmother in a big castle far the town, then after their father´s death they were cared with their wicked stepmother, a heartless woman that just mistreated the children all the time. One day the siblings were tired of that situation and they decided to scape and stay away on the forest.
When The stepmother saw it she got(felt) really angry in this moment she made a charm saying: when you drink the water of the river you will become like an animal and just the kiss of the true love will broke magic spell.
As the days, they arrived in a beautiful forest, but the siblings got (are felt) really tired and hungry. Suddenly the little brother saw a stream and he drunk a bit of water, immediately he became like a rabbit. Both siblings hugged and cried for what happened promising never get separed. Then, they found a shack and they lived there.
After several years, one day a King was hunted when unexpectedly he saw a rabbit starting to chase when suddenly the king fell of the horse and hurted strongly. The sister found the man and she took him at her shack, she gave food and cured his wounds while the king was recuperating he was feeling something special for the woman. During these days she and her brother took care of the king.
Finally, the King was impressed with the beauty of the girl, when he recovered he proposed to marry and she accepted . they kissed and surprisingly the rabbit recovered the human form. Happily the charm was broked and all was in peace and happiness for both sibling
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Ce contenu enfreint nos lignes directrices de la communauté.28 juillet 2015
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Correct me my sentences
When I was a Little girl:
-I liked to play dolls. Now i use the computer, ipod,usb
This things are important for to study because it save my information about homework.
-I liked to see cartoons on tv
Always i watched tv late and the weekends I woke up later. Remember I saw movies using VHS, this object is old. Now I use blue ray when i want to see a movie in my house.Also i wake up early because i have to go to work and study. When i return at home, i like to see a programas on tv.
-when I was 5 age I could not to ride a bike. I remember suffered several falls.
At that time my father taught me to ride a bike. Now I can .In the future i would like to learn to drive a car.
-Another thing, when i was Little girl i do not knew cook.
Therefore my mother cooked me when i went to school every day.Now I can cook. When i was 15 my mother taught me to cook.This is important because When i am home alone, i can cook myself.
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Correct me please -English
When I was a Little girl:
-I liked to play dolls. Now i use the computer, ipod,usb
This things are important for to study because it save my information about homework.
-I liked to see cartoons on tv
Always i watched tv late and the weekends I woke up later. Remember I saw movies using VHS, this object is old. Now I use blue ray when i want to see a movie in my house.Also i wake up early because i have to go to work and study. When i return at home, i like to see a programas on tv.
-when I was 5 age I could not to ride a bike. I remember suffered several falls.
At that time my father taught me to ride a bike. Now I can .In the future i would like to learn to drive a car.
-Another thing, when i was Little girl i do not knew cook.
Therefore my mother cooked me when i went to school every day.Now I can cook. When i was 15 my mother taught me to cook.This is important because When i am home alone, i can cook myself.
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Correct me please -English
Yo recuerdo cuando vi esos ojos negros que me miraban y me hacían sonrojar , y yo los miraba con sonrisa de complicad.
English:
I remember when I saw those black eyes looking at me and making me blush, and I looked back at them o then?¿ with a smile of complicity.
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Predictions of the future ..... Using "will"
We can not know exactly what will be our future technology, but we can imagine thanks to the predictions of scientists and their research.
-In 2050, the robots will be more inteligents tan people.
-In 40 years, we will have cell phones that will be able to capture odors. It is wil became the best friend of man.
-The laptop will have touch screens, that it will use for drawing or writing.
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My favorite hero is .....Please correct me
Daniel A. was born in Cerro de Pasco on Augusto 13, 1857. His parents were Baltazar Carrion he was a doctor and his mother Dolores Garcia.
He completed his primary education in Cerro de Pasco, when he was 8 age he lost his father. Later at 14 years of age he traveled to Lima for studied at the school Guadalupe, where finished his studies. After, in 1878 he came the Faculty of medicine of the University San Marcos, and was one of the best students in his classroom.
In 1885, when he studied medicine, he worked hard to demonstrate that he Peruvian wart and Oroya fever were the same disease. At the time an alarming plague , because two seemingly different diseases.
After comprehensive investigation , Carrion A. was injected the virus into his own body voluntarily.
Then, at home he was attended by students in medicine to care, the martyr of Peruvian medicine developed around the disease process.
I think, Carrion was a brave person, because he gave his life to finding a cure for the disease.
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Can someone correct my expressions???PLEASE
I went to visit Cusco with my Friends last month. We traveled by plane. We arrived early in the morning at the City. After, we went at the Hotel. We were stayed for a one week.
During my trip I talked with foreign torusits of different countries. I like it.
Somebody tourists visited Cusco for the first time. They were excited
I met touristic places as Sacsashuayma, Ollantaytambo and Urubamba. The most important place is Macchu Picchu . it is wonderful . I bought souvenirs for gift my parents.
I enjoyed my trip, because I could see the most important Inca City of the world and many landscapes. Also, the people in this City is very friendly
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Can someone correct my expressions???PLEASE
I remember, when I saw those black eyes and could spend hours and hours,
some gesture or a smile. It was an unexplainable feeling
I think it was my youth.
Now, after time when I find something funny memories. things I felt when I was 23 years old.
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