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Das Tierer
Ich liebe alles Tierer. Hunde, Katze, Vogel, Bär, etc.
Ich has eine Hund ????
Ich liebe nicht die maus und fliege !????????????????????????
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Jag äter kickling.
Jag är en kvinna.
Jag dricker vin och vatter.
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Ich heisse Pauline ???? ich wolle Deutsch lehrnen?!!!??
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Schools should spend on computers and software than on textbooks. Do you agree?
Nowadays, technology has an important role in our society especially in schools where young people is influenced by modern devices every day. I would like to explain why schools should spend more on computers.
Firstly, these machines are useful because in every kind of job you will always be requested to use one. In addition, devices have more information than textbooks where people find out more about topics when connecting to the Internet.
However, in the past people used to study only on the books but time is changing thanks to technology and we always need to be updated.
Secondly, even though books bring us to focusing on pictures instead technology can pop you into any place around the world towards a screen in a few seconds. As consequence I think this is the most enjoyable way to learn and study more.
Finally, in my opinion schools should spend more money in computers according to student ages in order to prepare young people for the future quickly.
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Report on shopping in Genoa.
Introduction
The aim of this report is to outline the most popular shops in my city and to point out why other shops should open.
Benefits
Genoa, being a city port, is situated in a good position where tourist from everywhere are attracted by the sea and its history. Crossing the downtown you can find many shops which sell the most popular fashion labels like Gucci, Prada, and so one. Many people, especially Russians, come here to buy those kinds of clothes.
In addition, if you have a smaller budget there are three shopping centers which allow people to catch things in discount during all year.
Disadvantages
The city port like Milan or Florence should focus on developing tourism increasing shops in order to give more choices those who like do expensive shopping.
Recommendations
I would recommend building up malls and bring most popular brands into the shopping activity avoiding tourism cut down,
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Should students have a long summer holiday or should terms be longer?
Nowadays, schools and universities have long terms which last nearly ten months, that means a lot of time to keep studying. I would like to explain why.
Firstly, attending schools during seasons like Autumn, Winter and Spring is better as there are few activities to take up outdoor because of snow or rain. Therefore, the best way to learn subjects is in this period of the year because students are used to staying inside.
Secondly, Summer with temperatures so high and sunny days could not allow students to focus on learning as everybody is off on holidays so apprehension would be more difficult. In addition, there are a deal of leisure activities to do such as windsurfing, canoeing, etc.
Even though some educational system is increasing their terms in my country, I think ten months are enough to study letting young people have fun in the warmest season.
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Which is more important: improving people's standard of living or protecting the environment.
Nowadays, many countries should improve people's standard of living giving them more opportunities of employment especially to young people which find less easy to set up due to lack of vacancies.
Firstly, governments should create more job fields developing technology and associating it with natural resources in order to keep our environment safe. Eve though this could be quite difficult to persuade people helping out with the environment. However, thanks to modern items we could increase programs where people save up money in electricity bills such as using of solar energy in all buildings.
Secondly, every individual person should have a place where to live in order to avoid home less people around big cities. If governments succeeded to deal with these society issues, many people would have a better standard of living.
Finally, I believe each of us should take care of our environment before being too late for it ans as a consequence our children can grow in a better planet. Although it often looks like not minding about improving population life for politicians.
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A report on improvements in one of the areas at school
Introduction
The aim of this report is to outline the main improvements which should be made to facilitate the students areas.
The cafeteria is one of the meeting point for the students. However, it could be improved giving people more comfort and availability in break hours.
Benefits
Firstly, the cafeteria offers a range menu of meals where people can choose between local and international dishes which is very important for foreign students. Moreover, cafeteria's furniture has a colorful style designed by students who helped out to this idea.
Disadvantages
On the other hand, the cafeteria is always crowed therefore it should be extended in order to give people more seats and to avoid them having meals quickly.
In addition, the cafeteria should have a team more available and motivated as sometimes they are a bit impolite as consequence students end up with not coming.
Recommendations
I would recommend improving these two points in order to give a good and friendly service to everybody and get ride of these little problems.
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An article about my favorite sport
Let's swim!
Swimming is one of the best and cheapest sports, you only need a swim suit, a pair of goggles and a cap and you can start.
This is a kind of sport which allow you to move every part of your body. I have been tried it recently and I am always keen to going on.
When you are in the swimming pool your body goes and your mind stops thinking about life problems and worries that is why I really enjoy this sport because you can totally relax in the water.
I am an amateur of swimming so I do it twice a week I do not pretend to be athletic but I am satisfied with the exercises I have to do.
On the other hand, I would like to have started swimming since baby in order to have had more confident. Despite that, I am quite happy to do it.
Those who would like to take up swimming should to sign up into a course in any public pool.
Swimming motivates you to do your best especially when you see kids going like dolphins. In addiction, this sport is important for everybody because in any dangerous situation you will not end up drowning but you learn to control anxiety and breathing.
I would suggest everybody does this wonderful sport.
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Dear Jamie,
I am happy to hear from you. I am writing this email because I would like to suggest where your sister and her friends could go next week.
They could pop in Portofino for a day journey as it is not so far from my city. There are many cheap boats from the Old Port and the trip just lasts one hour and half.
Otherwise, train is the best way to get there faster even though it is a bit expensive. It usually takes thirty minutes from the main station. However, if they prefer to visit museums and squares they might go around by bus or by foot.
I think they should leave early in the morning as they could find trains delay or crowed because of Summer season.
Regarding the return journey, they might take the last train by 8pm in order to come back before midnight.
I am sure your sister and her friends will have fun and a lovely journey here.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Loads of Love,
Pa
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