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writing task 2 in IELTS People have, in recent years, shown concerns over on the dire consequences of not having enough sport facilities and its ill effects on public health. It, however, seems that it is not the best way to an increase the number of sport buildings and we could consider other contributing factors. It is better to pay more attention to the quality of sport centers services .People, if we improve the quality of sport facilities, will demonstrate more tendencies to have a regular sport activity. We could attract more people by considering the quality instead of quantity of sport centers .There are a lot of brand new and high tech sport machines. High cost of sport centers membership fees is an obstacle. Being able to pay for the rising costs of sport facilities, even the poor can enjoy having a healthy lifestyle as much as possible. Take; we could consider some governmental subsidies for having more affordable sport facilities. However, by increasing the number of sport centers we can make sport buildings more accessible for everyone. People can save more time and money by having a local sport center and they do not have to waste their time on the streets getting stuck in traffic congestions. In conclusion, it, however, seems that increasing the number of sport centers is not the best way to improve public health and there are other contributing factors such as breaking down the costs and improving the quality of facilities. Another conclusion could be: In conclusion, public health, therefore, seems depend on various factors and increasing the number of sport buildings is not the best way to improve it.
28 mai 2015
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