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Could you correct the English writing?
Letter of agreement (<-- Is this okay? should it be 'memorandum' or 'written oath' or something?)
1. Living expenses for December will be deducted as much as the period of leaving Korea.(2016.11/8~11/22)
Living expenses for the period that I was not in Korea (2016.11/8~11/22) will be deducted from whole living expenses of December.
----> Which sentence is better? or can you write any better sentences?
2. If this sort of thing happens again, I will take responsibility for all my faults.
3. I will never let it(any arbitrary actions without notice) happen again.
* It is not my document lol
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An Article Translation
The agricultural officials of developing countries who have finished KNU-KOICA Master's Degree Program visited KNU and offered special lectures for KNU undergraduate students. From October 27th to November 1st, The Institute of International Research & Development invited 2014 KNU-KOICA Master's Degree Program students - Mugisha James(르완다 나이아가테르구 연구기관 연구원) and Nicolas Edualdo(에콰도르 농림축산수산부 공무원) and organized special lectures for KNU undergraduate students and 2016 KNU-KOICA Master's Degree Program students at KNU College of Agriculture and Life Sciences.
The lectures were arranged to share the success story of applying knowledge acquired from KNU Master's Degree Program and check the performance of the program. They introduced the life of KNU and the project related agriculture which is being progressed in their own countries.
Nicolas Edualdo said "In Ecuador, the projcet about 'Effect of climate change on corn farming' is underway. Even though 15 months was short period for study, the advanced agricultural policy and technologies that we learned from Korea were full of help for the project."
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I translated something, could you correct?
Institute of International Development and Research is composed of Daegu International Development Cooperation Center that performs ODA project as part of an international development cooperation for developing countries and International Agricultural Development Center that participates in Korean and international agricultural development research projects.
We are researching in order to provide policy and vision for agricultural policy corresponding local agricultural environment and condition, eco-friendly agriculture, and climate change response. We are also supporting studies about domestic and international agriculture to enhance regional competitiveness in global era.
Daegu International Development Cooperation Center aims to enhance international development cooperation by expanding interaction and relationship of cooperation with developing countries and supporting their economic and social growth catching up with ODA project of our government. To achieve our purpose, we are supporting Daegu & Gyeongbuk ODA projects with KOICA, such as ODA internship program, post management for WFK global volunteer and general ODA education.
Thank you for your attention for our institute, we will appreciate your generous support and encouragement.
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agricultural training program
The province of Gyeongsangbuk-do invited Rumanian agricultural trainee.
The province of Gyeongsangbuk-do invited Rumanian agricultural trainee who had visited the province of Gyeongsangbuk-do to learn advanced agricultural technology. The nine persons of Rumanian agricultural trainees were planning to benchmark the province's agricultural policy and high-technology of agriculture such as cultivation and processing of beans and sweet potatoes which they are interested in.
<2016 Gyeongsangbuk-do Agricultural Training Program> is an inviting training program that is hosted by Gyeongsangbuk-do and run by Institute of International Research and Development at the University. The program was progressed with the persons concerned with agriculture from the three countries - Rumania, Cambodia and Mongolia, during 7 days for each program from July to October. Those three groups commonly had a meeting at the province of Gyeongsangbuk-do, and visited some places such as a birthplace of Saemaul movement in Cheongdo and Hahoe Village in Andong. Welcoming ceremony and completion ceremony were held in the university, and there was a Korean traditional music performance in each welcoming ceremony. Each trainee group visited several different places based on their interest. Rumanian trainee group took field trips to sweet potato field and processing plant, and two different tofu plants in Andong because they are interested in beans, tofu and sweet potato cultivation and processing. Cambodian group visited a mushroom plant 'Green Peace' in Cheongdo, and also went to three agricultural technology centers in Chilgok, Gunwi and Uiseong. Mongolian group, who are interested in livestock raising, visited two goat ranches in Mungyeong and Chupungryung. They also went to a pig farm, oriental melon farm and plant factory 'Bioworks' so that they could be initiated the advanced agricultural technologies.
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Could you correct this English writing?
<2016 Gyeongsangbuk-do Agricultural Training Program> is an inviting training program that is hosted by Gyeongsangbuk-do and run by Institute of International Research and Development at Kyungpook National University. The program was progressed with the persons concerned with agriculture from the three countries - Rumania, Cambodia and Mongolia, during 7 days for each program from July to October. Those three groups commonly had a meeting at the province of Gyeongsangbuk-do, and visited some places such as a birthplace of Saemaul movement in Cheongdo and Hahoe Village in Andong. Welcoming ceremony and completion ceremony were held in the university, and there was a Korean traditional music performance in each welcoming ceremony. Each trainee group visited several different places based on their interest.
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Could you correct my English writing? 2
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The methods we have used for the research are documentary survey, questionnaire survey, in-depth interview and focus group interview. We made a report based on results. Judging from the report, the most important thing is the support from the government of Cambodia for poor agriculture industry, and also high-quality training and rural leaders are necessary. Therefore it can be said that manpower and budget is serious problem in Cambodia. Besides, creating high value-added industries by nurturing sextic industry is needed because of lack of technology for processing and distribution in Cambodia.
In order to solve these problems and support agricultural development in Cambodia, we propose a business of rural leader training improvement and a research project for sextic industry.
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Could you correct my English writing?
any corrections are welcomed (?)... thank you so much.
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Cambodia is featuring an economy centered on agriculture and has an agriculture-first policy. The main priority is enhancing agricultural productivity. To this end, the government of Cambodia is promoting agricultural development strategies and rural leader training project with 3 leading agricultural universities. But as of foreign countries is needed for the lack of funds, experimental materials, new technology update and capacity of universities.
To conduct an effective research for promoting Cambodian agricultural development strategy, we were motivated to figure out the universities’ current management status and identify their capacity, In addition, we investigated about Cambodian rural leader training and sextic industry.
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"soul-crushingly dull" ?
It's just so much fun to spend money! On delicious food, or ten dollar drinks, or pretty hats, or airplane tickets, or any of the sixteen billion things in this world that are a blast to purchase, own, and experience. And it's so soul-crushingly dull not to spend it, knowing that it's right there, calling to you.
what is "blast" and "soul-crushingly dull" in that sentences?
I guess the "blast" means something fun..?
and soul crushingly dull is something really boring, is that right?
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